Fixed some weird sentencing and a few misspelled words such as:

• Pain in body --> pain in my body 
• Rapid dog --> rabid dog
• Make restore friendship --> restore your friendship

I've definitely missed a few, however, I just don't have time to thoroughly comb through every line of dialogue, so I'm just going to let it go. And since my real first year of university is starting soon I want to focus on that! Hopefully you are not taken out of the moment too much by the misspellings and incorrect grammar (I did create everything in under 1 month so there's a lot of... incoherent-ness) and thanks for understanding! If the new versions don't work, I'll still keep the old versions up and available to download.

I also plan to (maybe) release a small collection of concept art with some new drawings in there as well, so look out for that! 
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@yorripi